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A Happy Day-愉快的一天 【内容提示】

A Happy Day-愉快的一天,A Happy Day-愉快的一天范文

冬天里,一场大雪过后,大地积雪皑皑。这时,假如有人问你最愿意干的事是什么,你的回答十有八九是“打雪仗”。正好,有一个星期五的下午,下课以后你们老师走进教室建议第二天早晨你们上山玩打雪仗游戏,同学们齐声响应。请你把你们玩打雪仗的情况写成一篇文章。

【作文示范】A Happy Day

Wintr cam and th first snow bgan to fall. It was arly Saturday morning. Whn I got up and lookd out of th window, I saw trs, roofs and th ground all covrd with snow. Th world smd to b a vast xpans① of whitnss②. How bautiful!“A havy snow, a rich harvst.”Pasants must b vry happy. I was happy, too, bcaus…. Wll, lt m tll you.In th prvious aftrnoon, whn school was ovr, our tachr cam into th classroom. “Shall w go to th hill and hav a snow fight?”sh askd us with a smil.“Good!”th whol class shoutd chrfully.

That's why I was so happy in th morning.

Whn w got to th hill, w startd making snow balls at onc. Suddnly a snow ball hit m in th fac. How cold! Whn I had mad nough snow balls, I bgan to throw thm at my“nmis”.

W thrw snow balls at ach othr; w kpt laughing and shouting. What grat fun! W wr childrn again. W did not stop njoying ourslvs until w could not s ach othr clarly for th dark.

On our way hom, w wr still talking about our snow fight. Th wind was blowing hard, but w did not fl th cold. What a happy day!(选自1988年4月19日《上海学生英文报》)

【词语解释】

①xpans[iks'p$ns] n.广阔(的区域);浩瀚②whitnss ['waitnis] n.白;白色

【写法指要】

文章的引言段写到“瑞雪兆丰年”,农民高兴,自己也高兴。接着用插叙的手法写前一天下午老师的建议。第三段是过渡段。然后,四、五段是打“雪仗”的场面描写。结尾段写他们的兴奋劲,点题并与标题照应。 A Happy Day-愉快的一天

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