雅思小作文求批改+评论内容:剑桥8test2
Accordingtothreepiecharts,itcanbeconcludedthatannualspendingbyaparticularUKschoolchangesfromyeartoyear.
Teachers'salarieswerethedominantproportioninabout20years.Overtheperiodfrom1981to1991,spendingonthispartgrewby10%,from40%to50%.But,itmoderatelydeclinedto45%in2001.
Insurancespendinghadaslightincreasefrom2%in1981to3%in1991.However,therewasaconsiderableincreaseininsurancespending,comparedwiththedata(3%)in1991.Itwentupto8%in2001.
Nevertheless,spendingonotherworkers'salariesdroppedyearbyyear.Therewasadownwardtrend.Itdecreasedfrom28%in1981to22%in1991.Consequently,itdescendedtoonly5%in2001.
Thereweresomesimilaritiesbetweenresourcesspendingandspendingonfurnitureandequipment.Theybothexperiencedupanddownoveraspanof20years.Resourcesascendedto22%in1991,6%morethanspendingin1981.However,itplummetedto9%in2001.Likewise,spendingonfurnitureandequipmentdecreasedby10%to5%in1991.Then,itsoaredto23%in2001.
Threepiechartsdepictthatthemajorpercentageofspendingisteachers'salaries,whichoccupyabouthalfofthechart.Otherspending,likeinsurance,resources,willfloatupanddown.
我觉得我的结尾写得不太好...
陈崇枢回答：
第一段changes-----varies第二段spending---expenditureonthisleapedby10%,reachingtheproportionof50%第四段Therewasadownwardtrend.Itdecreasedfrom28%in1981to22%in1991.Consequently,it...
